Hey Frizz - remember the 16:9 aspect ratio! And watch your lighting too - it's very bright and hard - and maybe a bit too plasticky? I'd just soften the lighting levels and perhaps think too how lighting might be used to create a bit more space in this environment - i.e. lighting it in such a way as to make the foreground pop out and the background elements recede a bit more. Right now you've got a bit of 'white noise' going on - i.e that compositionally, I don't know what's more or less important - a bit more control, Frizzia!