you're getting there, Fizzgig - but yes, the lawnmower sounds like a chainsaw! I did like the ticking clock addition, though it does feel as if the song should disappear much earlier? You had a strange effect on the song in this section which ultimately sounded like a mistake, like two tracks repeating or something? The 'travel section' is beginning to cohere, but it needs more blending still. I suggest you give the sound design a rest for a few days, pick up on something else - and come back to it. You've worked hard to get this together - but fresh ears are good, so give yourself a break.